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October 16, 2009

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ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਤਸਵੀਰ

ਦਰਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਤਸਵੀਰ ਬਣੀ
ਮੱਥੇ ਦੀ ਇੱਕ ਲਕੀਰ ਬਣੀ
ਬਣਨਾ ਸੀ ਤਕਦੀਰ ਤੂੰ ਮੇਰੀ,
ਪਰ ਸਿਆਲਾਂ ਦੀ ਹੀਰ ਬਣੀ

-ਸੰਗਤਾਰ

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  1. Goldy Dang
    Nov 3 2009

    Satshriakal bhaji. Very nice lines. Rabb mehar kare Ji.

  2. Pawan NZ
    Nov 3 2009

    very nice Sangtaar Ji..

  3. MANDEEP AULAKH
    Nov 3 2009

    AM SPEECHLESS…U R AMAZING….DOWN TO EARTH…KEEP IT UP…

  4. Nov 3 2009

    Shahmukhi Transliteration:

    درداں دی تسوِیر بنِی

    مّتّھے دی اِّکّ لکِیر بنِی

    بننا سی تکدِیر تُون میری،

    پر سیالاں دی ہِیر بنِی

  5. Nov 3 2009

    umar niayan vich pata hi na laga,
    kadon dil chandre nu rog ishke da la lia.
    janam janam tak chees rehni pinday vich,
    khand de bhulekhe asi mauhra aisa kha lia.
    rai harjit wair piya sare jag naal,
    jidan da tere naal payar asan paa lia,

    rai harjit

  6. Nov 11 2009

    Roman Transliteration:

    dardāṅ dī tasvīr

    dardāṅ dī tasvīr baṇī
    matthē dī ikk lakīr baṇī
    baṇnā sī takdīr tūṅ mērī,
    par siālāṅ dī hīr baṇī

    -saṅgtār

  7. Manpreet Singh
    Nov 16 2009

    SSA 22ji,
    Ajj first time tuhadi poetry ethe read kiti te eh read karke mann nu bahut hi khushi hoyi….. Umeed karde aa ke future ch tuhadiyan poems di book vi read karan nu zaroor milegi…..Parmatma tuhadi kalam salamat rakhe te seene wichle sek nu maghda rakhe….Khush Raho….
    Manpreet Singh
    Melbourne

  8. Nov 20 2009

    [url=http://www.desicomments.com/punjabi/heer-2/][img]http://www.desicomments.com/dc/24/62506/625061.jpg[/img][/url]

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