Sangtar's Punjabi Poetry Blog

6 Responses to “ਬਣ ਬਣ ਕੇ”

1. Gurpreet S. Chatha, on December 1st, 2009 at 8:12 pm Said:

   Amazingly well written and I think I did get what poet wanted to convey.

   Thank you once again.

   Gurpreet.

2. hummie king, on December 2nd, 2009 at 10:09 am Said:

   wah bhaji, watt kad te…….

3. Sangtar, on December 2nd, 2009 at 5:37 pm Said:

   baṇ baṇ kē

   tērē raṅg vich sadā raṅgē baṇ baṇ kē
   sāthōṅ rihā nahīṅōṅ jāndā chaṅgē baṇ baṇ kē

   uh aivēṅ nahīṅ kahāundē khushbūāṅ dē viōpārī
   chubbhē phullāṅ vich kadē kaṇḍē baṇ baṇ kē

   sāḍī zindgī dī jinhāṅ sārī chūs laī raṅgīnī
   ajj uh sāḍē kōḷōṅ ḷaṅghē baṇ baṇ kē

   jadōṅ laggdī piās lōhā lākhā jihā hō kē
   pīndā ratt trishūl khaṇḍē baṇ baṇ kē

   ajj vēkhī nahīṅōṅ jāndī uhnāṅ shāhāṅ dī majāj
   jinhāṅ rēsham baṇāē naṅgē baṇ baṇ kē

4. Meet Kaler, on December 2nd, 2009 at 5:40 pm Said:

   very nice bai g.waheguru tuhadi kalam nu hor taqat bakshe.

5. Akaldeep Kaur, on December 2nd, 2009 at 5:40 pm Said:

   Sangtar ji realy love ur poetry blog…… Keep it up…… Rabb tuhanu chardeya kalan bakhshe….rabb rakha

6. Reet, on December 14th, 2009 at 2:14 am Said:

   u have beauty of thoughtssss,,,Heart touching poetry.
   All the best,,,,

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